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Foundations (the full version)

tfrank357[Offline] Date added: 01/28/2005
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Poem Rating :  10
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Foundations

it is a constant force like infatuation,
grabbing you every time you see her.

it is filled with un-conditional mercy and love,
close only to the likeness of the faith that you hold.

it is spiritual from the beginning,
causing you to repent what is not known.

it is compassionate and caring in nature,
creating a nucleus of love within your soul.

it is the cause for fear and respect,
man can create respect when there is none for self.

it is focus, poise, relentlessness, determination,
creating a follower within you since birth.

it is inner peace that creates the passion for life,
the sanctuary for hurt, pain, and frustration.

it is the foundation that which all men stand upon,
from birth to her lap, every man has touched her.

it is joy, nervousness, zeal, admiration,
the moment of silence she breathes for your accomplishments.

what is your foundation?

shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……… she’s sleeping,
let her rest to carry what she has always held up tomorrow.


-tf

tfrank357
 Posted by: tfrank357
Comments (4):
angel2u41[Offline]angel2u41says:
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i love this read....but the one on your page is better....just my opinion....peace to you always tf...angel2u4one
09/11/2007
onesoul[Offline]onesoulsays:
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nap time may be over.....wonderful read tf
08/20/2007
MoKha[Offline]MoKhasays:
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I look at these words that have stumbled from my mouth and pen clumsily, sporadically and haphazardly...here you have managed to arrange them perfectly and as a mother, I feel the grace of your sentiment...blessings, MoKha
03/09/2007
PoeticMic[Offline]PoeticMicsays:
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257
The beauty of this poem is that it honors our mothers. those mothers that cared and brought
us up as individuals despite hardship, pain and suffering. Our mother's gave us that "Foundation"
to stand on and grow up on. Without that foundation no telling where a lot of poeple would be. I salute
my foundation.
03/24/2005
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