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I don't need you

Nikee502[Offline] Date added: 05/27/2005
Total Votes :  6
Poem Rating :  6
Poem Views: 269

Why do I keep holding on
to your constant lies
When all I do is
sit at home and cry
You want me to act like
i'm with you
While you're out doing
whatever you do
For 3 years I've been waiting
for us to be
Yet still you have your reasons
for not being with me
You don't want to see me
with no one else
Now I see, you're just
thinking of your self
It took me 3 years to
finally see
That I just need to look
out for me
So with this I'm
officially through
I have to be honest with
myself......I DON'T NEED YOU!

Nikee502
 Author: Nikee502
 Posted by: Nikee502
Comments (3):
pat44black[Offline]pat44blacksays:
Total Critiques:
183
straight and to the point i like that in a read and sounds like you had a revelation as well...peace, 44
10/01/2008
blueyez[Offline]blueyezsays:
Total Critiques:
495
OMG is his name courtney? Girrrrrrrrrrl it is like you wrote this about me and the guy I've been seeing for like 3 years *shock* it is just like this and so heartwrenching!!!!! Keep pennin!
06/19/2007
celebre[Offline]celebresays:
Total Critiques:
831
Good flow and conclusion. Enjoyed.
Peace.
12/11/2006
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