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About You

spice8080[Offline] Date added: 12/03/2005
Total Votes :  19
Poem Rating :  9.5
Poem Views: 234

Your touch makes me tingle, I feel the warmth,
I get excited like a child by the hearth,
waiting for Santa to magically appear,
your touch makes me tingle when you are so near.

Your smile warms my heart and I really must say,
it's like hot chocolate on a cold winters day,
and you know dear, it sparkles in a very tempting way,
your smile warms my heart when you flash it my way.

Your breath in my ear gets me ready for you,
I hear the whisper and feel it there too,
The chills up my spine get my blood surging through,
Your breath in my ear gets me ready for you.

Your voice makes me shudder when it is so deep,
like after you awake from a long nights sleep,
so deep and so sexy it makes my heart flutter,
your voice in my ear really makes me shudder.

Your tender kiss ignites the fire that is there,
you pull me towards you and stroke my long hair.
I love your thick lips so softly they touch,
your tender kiss shows you love me so much.

spice8080
 Author: C.E.Weir
 Posted by: spice8080
Comments (4):
lpjh-do[Offline]lpjh-dosays:
Total Critiques:
381
nice read!!
08/05/2007
reed01[Offline]reed01says:
Total Critiques:
261
Ms spice8080....love your poetry...it's so smooooth.
peace
reed01
06/26/2007
heartfun[Offline]heartfunsays:
Total Critiques:
37
YES VERY NICE PIECE
12/21/2005
Honey[Offline]Honeysays:
Total Critiques:
8
thats a nice poem
12/03/2005
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