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HomePoetic Mic Poem --- THE MAKINGS OF A MAN (A tribute to Black Men)

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THE MAKINGS OF A MAN (A tribute to Black Men)

areaun[Offline] Date added: 09/20/2005
Total Votes :  39
Poem Rating :  9.75
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WHAT IS THE MAKINGS OF A MAN YOU MIGHT ASK
WELL IT DEPENDS ON THE WOMAN YOU QUESTION
SEE FOR ME IT VARIES....BUT ENOUGH ABOUT THE CONTRARYS TO POPULAR BELIEF

A GOOD BLACK MAN IS THERE WHEN YOU COME HOME FROM WORK
AND MAY EVEN MASSAGE YOUR FEET
HE IS KIND, GENTLE, LOVING, AND STRONG
SENSITIVE ENOUGH TO ADMIT WHEN HE'S WRONG
A GOOD MAN WILL HAVE YOU FANTASIZING ALL THE DAYS LONG
AND RUSHING HOME TO PERFORM, THE BALANCING ACT OF 'CATERING TO HIM ALL THE NIGHT LONG'
BUT NOT JUST ANY OLE MAN WILL DO
A POSITIVE BLACK MAN CARES ABOUT WHAT YOU HAVE BEEN THROUGH
HE'LL TAKE NOTICE OF THOSE "LIL THINGS" THAT MEAN THE WORLD TO YOU
AND WHEN YOU ARE SICK HE'LL TAKE CARE OF YOU
WHEN YOU ARE HURT, HE'LL COMFORT YOU
AND WHEN YOU ARE WRONG, HE'LL FORGIVE YOU
HE HAS AN OPEN HEART AS PURE AS GOLD
WILL FOREVER BE LONGING FOR YOUR SPECIAL HOLD
WILL NOT TRY TO CHANGE, MANIPULATE OR MOLD

THESE ARE THE MAKINGS OF A GOOD CENTER CORE

areaun
 Author: Ms Arie 4 u 2
 Posted by: areaun
Comments (3):
angel2u41[Offline]angel2u41says:
Total Critiques:
864
Very nice Tribute to our Strong Black Men Sis Arie~....very nice all the makings that a strong Black Sista needs!!
10/09/2007
celebre[Offline]celebresays:
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828
Good expression Areaun. Enjoyed. Most importantly, a good man is himself
with no pretenses and loves his woman unconditionally. Peace.
03/28/2007
mystic_i_69[Offline]mystic_i_69says:
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1534
That was well said, to be able to say what you want in the KINGS we seek to build with, it is first important to be that Queen he's deserving of
Love this one, i admirer your style can't wait to read more of your special works.
Peace & Blessings
_I_
03/27/2007
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